Since I'm wrestling with titles at the moment, I thought I'd talk about the process of finding the right title for a book. Titles can be tricky and elusive things! Sometimes the perfect title just appears out of nowhere - but just as often it doesn't.
As an example, I'll use a book of mine that came out in 2009 - a dark and romantic fantasy novel about a young woman (named Saliel) who is a spy. We'll call it Saliel's book, for now.
Saliel's book started life as MASQUERADE, because both Saliel and the hero are spies and are (obviously) masquerading as people they're not - in this case, nobles in the decadent and oppressive Corhonase court. The title fitted, but it was so generic that it had to go! (Visit amazon.com and see how many books have the title MASQUERADE. Lots!)
Next came the title WALK IN SHADOWS, which I still like for a number of reasons: Saliel and the hero are often in the catacombs below the Corhonase citadel (which are obviously dark and shadowy places); when they're above ground in the Corhonase court, they're constantly under the shadowy threat of capture and torture and death; and Saliel comes from the worst of her homeland's slums, a taint that will forever be a shadow over her head. But that title was too like the title of my previous fantasy novel (THIEF WITH NO SHADOW). It made the two books sound like they were part of a series, which they weren't - different worlds, different magic.
So Saliel's book then became EYE SPY, which again fitted very well. The main characters are spies, and both Saliel and the sadistic spycatcher possess a form of magic called witch-eye. However, EYE SPY has a very contemporary and almost humorous ring to it, and Saliel's book has a dark tone and is set in an oppressive Elizabethan world. So that title had to go.
Finally, my agent came up with THE LAURENTINE SPY, which is the title we went with. The title tells us that the book is about a spy, the fabulous cover shows Saliel and the hero in the catacombs, and while there's no hint of magic in the title, the backcover blurb deals with that: Saliel has many secrets; her spying is one, her past as a pickpocket in Laurent's slums is another, but her most deeply guarded secret is the magic she possesses. She walks a narrow path between discovery as a spy and being burned as a witch. Etc, etc.
So, there you have it: the evolution of a title!
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